Feedback

Got feedback on Quest. That came very quickly, and I wish to extend a heartfelt, "Thank You", to my beta reader. Don't know if Beta Reader wants to be identified, so I won't.

Good feedback. A couple of my concerns were confirmed, and a couple were set aside. And then there were several things I missed entirely. Those were especially good.

It looks like the story is in for a significant rewrite, though, despite the overall positive review. But I felt I had drifted from my original premise and that was one of the confirmations I got. So I'm redoing the beginning, middle, and end. (You can't rewrite much more than that.)

I'm not dumping everything. I am dumping the beginning and replacing it with something better (I think). The middle needs more tension, and so I'll mainly be adding. There is the one major scene which I haven't decided about. Part of me is thinking of dumping it, and part of me is thinking it could be useful if I alter it so that it become part of the tension. The ending will mostly stay the same, but it also needs to be "fleshed out" a bit.

I've actually begun the rewrite already.

On another front, I submitted my query to Evil Editor.